Crimson Dawn Comic Issue 1-1

Issue 1 part 1 of a digital comic that I am developing for school. I am an amateur comic artist and animator so I would appreciate any comments and suggestions. thanks.

Programs Used:
Adobe Photoshop CS2
Macromedia Flash MX 2004
Sony Vegas 7.0

Part 2 can be found here: [link]
Part 3 can be found here: [link]